A Planet-Shaped Vase

For today’s prompt, write a breaking poem.

A Planet-Shaped Vase

On a no school snow day
playing ball in the house
I broke a fancy vase

Instead of attempting repair
with cartoon cow glue
I found my father’s hammer

Smashed the shards
enjoying the crack crack crack
and ceramic dust in my nose

Just like humanity
I knew I shouldn’t
and I knew the fix

But chose the thrill
over my grandchildren’s
survival

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About Bartholomew Barker

Bartholomew Barker is an organizer of Living Poetry, a collection of poets in the Triangle region of North Carolina where he has hosted a monthly feedback workshop for more than decade. His first poetry collection, Wednesday Night Regular, written in and about strip clubs, was published in 2013. His second, Milkshakes and Chilidogs, a chapbook of food inspired poetry was served in 2017. He was nominated for a Pushcart Prize in 2021. Born and raised in Ohio, studied in Chicago, he worked in Connecticut for nearly twenty years before moving to Hillsborough where he lives and writes poetry.
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6 Responses to A Planet-Shaped Vase

  1. That’s so damning and so damn good. Well said, Bart. You are shining in my eyes.

    Mary

    On Sat, Apr 9, 2022 at 4:57 PM Bartholomew Barker, Poet wrote:

    > Bartholomew Barker posted: ” For today’s prompt, write a breaking poem. A > Planet-Shaped Vase On a no school snow dayplaying ball in the houseI broke > a fancy vase Instead of attempting repairwith cartoon cow glueI found my > father’s hammer Smashed the shardsenjoying th” >

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  2. ivor20's avatar ivor20 says:

    Shattering Bart …

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  3. Bill's avatar Bill says:

    Made it permanently gone. Yikes.

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