Like the color of thunder
or the taste of a song
be like the snow falling
at midnight in the woods
where Robert Frost stopped
then chose to keep going
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“Color of thunder.”
“Taste of a song.”
I love what you did here, Bart! This is stellar writing!
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Thank you, Tre! This was written in a Living Poetry Germination Workshop over Zoom last weekend and didn’t need much revision afterwards.
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You’re most welcome! I agree! It’s a solid poem.
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Beautiful!! You can almost hear the hush of the snow.
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Thank you! That’s what I was going for.
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I’ve enjoyed lingering in this spot. ❄️ Thank you, Bart.
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Thank you for the linger, Michele. My hope is always for a reader to spend more than a little time in my little poems.
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Hush is such a perfect term for a night snowfall. Love the synesthesia in the first few lines. Delightfully tasty.
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Thank you! Playing with synesthesia is great fun in poetry, as you well know.
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