The walls are comforting.
They haven’t moved
but the furniture
is half gone.
The echoes
knock a sick spot
in my stomach.
I won’t miss
the television.
The couch
can be replaced—
but not you.
Take the pots and pans,
I’m not hungry.
The walls are comforting.
They haven’t moved
but the furniture
is half gone.
The echoes
knock a sick spot
in my stomach.
I won’t miss
the television.
The couch
can be replaced—
but not you.
Take the pots and pans,
I’m not hungry.
The echoes
knock a sick spot
in my stomach…captures so much.
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Thanks! I’m rather proud of that line.
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You grabbed me with that very first line. Well-done, Bartholomew.
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Thanks. It’s important to have a strong opening. Glad this one works.
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You’re welcome! :)
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