Thoughts while Traffic is Slow

Approaching the side of a mountain,
at a few miles per hour,

I watch cumulus clouds
cast shadows on the land
which move like the spots
on a Harlequin Great Dane don’t.

The shadow of a hawk or eagle
swifts across the interstate.
I hunch inside my little hybrid
from some ancient instinct.

At last I see the entrance
to the tunnel and the cars
being swallowed up like sun
as I cross into darkness.

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About Bartholomew Barker

Bartholomew Barker is an organizer of Living Poetry, a collection of poets in the Triangle region of North Carolina where he has hosted a monthly feedback workshop for more than decade. His first poetry collection, Wednesday Night Regular, written in and about strip clubs, was published in 2013. His second, Milkshakes and Chilidogs, a chapbook of food inspired poetry was served in 2017. He was nominated for a Pushcart Prize in 2021. Born and raised in Ohio, studied in Chicago, he worked in Connecticut for nearly twenty years before moving to Hillsborough where he lives and writes poetry.
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12 Responses to Thoughts while Traffic is Slow

  1. berniebell1955's avatar berniebell1955 says:

    It’s all there – planets moving – casting shadows on each other – on us – light to darkness – darkness to light. 

    Concise – yet full of meaning – another Bartholomew Barker poem.

    Was it written on your way to view the Eclipse?

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  2. Those time when we are stopped in traffic can be little blessings to regroup and notice. I love how you instinctually hunch down when the hawk shadow flies over. I do stuff like that all the time, knowing that I am not going to be hit. Enjoyed this post.

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  3. thelongview's avatar thelongview says:

    Love the imagery! Especially the Harlequin Great Dane’s spots 😀

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