For today’s prompt, write a second chance poem.
I’ll never know why
Why she stopped replying
to my texts and emails
It was probably something I said
since I usually say too much
Looking up on a clear night
joking about Virgo or Cassiopeia
I still remember the smell of her hair
the warmth of her hand in mine
But I don’t consider her
the one that got away
It’s probably for the best
I need lots of second chances
But maybe under starry skies
she sometimes thinks of me
and laughs
About Bartholomew Barker
Bartholomew Barker is one of the organizers of Living Poetry, a collection of poets and poetry lovers in the Triangle region of North Carolina. His first poetry collection, Wednesday Night Regular, written in and about strip clubs, was published in 2013. His second, Milkshakes and Chilidogs, a chapbook of food inspired poetry was served in 2017. He was nominated for a Pushcart Prize in 2021. Born and raised in Ohio, studied in Chicago, he worked in Connecticut for nearly twenty years before moving to Hillsborough where he makes money as a computer programmer to fund his poetry habit.
I feel this whole heartedly 💔
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Glad this resonates with you. Thanks for reading.
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Poignant and achingly sad.
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Thanks. Not getting a second chance usually is.
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There’s always the possibility of a second chance – it just may not be the one we want at the time…….
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Very true.
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Cute. We all need second chances, some of us more than others. I like the ending too. Sometimes I laugh too when I think of you.
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Good. Better to be laughed at than forgotten.
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Why?? … I’ve no answer to that mysterous question ..
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I guess neither of us will ever know then.
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I agree!
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I love how the poem makes me feel, a sense of cherish the memories and content with now.
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Excellent. Glad my poem was able to evoke such feelings. Thanks!
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Nice
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Thanks
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Nicely done – especially the conclusion. It’s open to many interpretations, and it’s entirely relatable.
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Thanks! I was wondering about that last line. I’m not sure how to interpret it either.
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I have a poem of similar sentiments, about a boy, one that l let go. But, this also reminds of Patsy Cline’s “Walkin’ after Midnight.”
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Very cool. Thanks.
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