Fraiku from Alnitak

Posted on 2022-03-25 by Bartholomew Barker

I won’t say “I love you”
Love is a shooting star
I prefer “Let me help”

(Inspired by a line from the Star Trek episode “The City on the Edge of Forever“.)

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About Bartholomew Barker

Bartholomew Barker is an organizer of Living Poetry, a collection of poets in the Triangle region of North Carolina where he has hosted a monthly feedback workshop for more than decade. His first poetry collection, Wednesday Night Regular, written in and about strip clubs, was published in 2013. His second, Milkshakes and Chilidogs, a chapbook of food inspired poetry was served in 2017. He was nominated for a Pushcart Prize in 2021. Born and raised in Ohio, studied in Chicago, he worked in Connecticut for nearly twenty years before moving to Hillsborough where he lives and writes poetry.
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  2. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris's avatar (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
    2022-03-25 at 19:54

    A shooting star is only here for a brief moment when it accidentally collided with our atmosphere – it’s the end of its run. Prior to that it’s could be millions or billions of years in existence – so, perhaps love could be like the shooting star. Going on and on and on – or is that the Eveready Bunny? I get confused …. 😊

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  3. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris's avatar (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
    2022-03-25 at 19:55

    Collides – Why isn’t there an edit function in comments?!?

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