I want to be a tree when I grow up
Nothing ostentatious
I don’t want to be a sequoia
or have some historical significance
no proclamations in my honor
signed by the governor
Just a regular tree in the woods
unfurling my leaves
in the warm spring
dropping them in autumn
when they become too showy
Maybe an ash— tall with smooth gray bark
and hard wood— deep roots holding me fast
entwined with the Earth and old
so old I don’t even notice the days
or the birds nesting in my hair
But I’m just a short soft human
a dandelion dreaming of a sunflower
(For today’s Living Poetry Prompt.)
Awwww, That is a sweet ending.
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Thanks. I haven’t given up my dream quite yet.
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Look at you, using all the prompts! And a beautiful poem, as well.
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Thank you!
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It’s so beautifully written! You have got deep expression, just loved your writing style. Glad to have found your blog :)
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it.
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Oh I love this poem! I must say I fell in love with this poem. 💚
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Wow. That’s good to know. Maybe I’ll take it to a workshop. Thank you!
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Great idea! But will you really want it to be pulled apart? 😃
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There’s no poem of mine that can’t be improved.
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You are like an oil drill….lol
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I’d rather use a gold miner metaphor. Less of a carbon footprint. ;)
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I thought about the gold mining, but that would be a gold digger, so I changed that to oil drill…I am also for kinder to the environment though. 😃
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I’m fine with gold digging.
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Lovely!!
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Thank you very much!
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Very nice reflective lines.🙏
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Thanks.
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But…it’s OK to dream Bartholomew, and yours is very beautiful:) 🌲🌴🌳
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If I stop posting poetry, you can assume my dream came true.
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That is a beautiful epitaph by the way:)
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Thank you.
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Very sweet poem with a soft ending. Nice!
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Thank you!
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