The sun’s no hotter

The sun’s no hotter

It’s just the atmosphere
soaking it all in
like a pasty beach body
with no SPF

Burning

We slept too long
skin red as a tornado
on doppler or a lobster
boiling in a pot

This is the inheritance
of my angry children—
blisters and pain
in a world inflamed


Written to this week’s Living Poetry Prompt: Heirloom and Go Dog Go Cafe’s Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge which provided the picture.

 

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About Bartholomew Barker

Bartholomew Barker is an organizer of Living Poetry, a collection of poets in the Triangle region of North Carolina where he has hosted a monthly feedback workshop for more than decade. His first poetry collection, Wednesday Night Regular, written in and about strip clubs, was published in 2013. His second, Milkshakes and Chilidogs, a chapbook of food inspired poetry was served in 2017. He was nominated for a Pushcart Prize in 2021. Born and raised in Ohio, studied in Chicago, he worked in Connecticut for nearly twenty years before moving to Hillsborough where he lives and writes poetry.
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9 Responses to The sun’s no hotter

  1. Annabel's avatar Annabel says:

    It’s a wonderful modern poem! Loved the pic as well👍

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  2. JeanMarie's avatar JeanMarie says:

    Ouch. Pass the aloe

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  3. Jewish Young Professional "JYP"'s avatar jewishyoungprofessional says:

    I love the clever use of the sunburn metaphor as a wake up call re: climate change. Cleverly done!

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  4. Lisa Tomey-Zonneveld's avatar Lisa Tomey says:

    How appropriate for these times.

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