Postcards from the Path of Totality

Like the land, I relax as we cross the great river
and it flattens out for the eclipse.

I’m talking like you’re in the passenger’s seat
describing embarrassing childhood memories
as I motor past my youth,

the muddy creek in summer,
the Quaker meeting house at Easter,
the roller-skating rink every time.

You just had to be there, I laugh,
which is why I’m driving,
aiming for the right place
at the right time.

I spy two ducks swimming
just above a waterfall,
waiting for food to come to them
but they have to keep running
just to stand still.

I don’t mind traveling alone
since I carry you
in my back pocket.


“Today, we’d like to challenge you to write a poem titled “Wish You Were Here” that takes its inspiration from the idea of a postcard.”

Obviously, I don’t follow instructions well.

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About Bartholomew Barker

Bartholomew Barker is an organizer of Living Poetry, a collection of poets in the Triangle region of North Carolina where he has hosted a monthly feedback workshop for more than decade. His first poetry collection, Wednesday Night Regular, written in and about strip clubs, was published in 2013. His second, Milkshakes and Chilidogs, a chapbook of food inspired poetry was served in 2017. He was nominated for a Pushcart Prize in 2021. Born and raised in Ohio, studied in Chicago, he worked in Connecticut for nearly twenty years before moving to Hillsborough where he lives and writes poetry.
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3 Responses to Postcards from the Path of Totality

  1. Lovely. I like the traveling movement you create.

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