Night arrives after a long day
I just want to be covered by your breath
but the rain will have to do
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Yes, but only after you gargle.
Seriously though, this says so much in so few words. I love it.
It’s actually raining here in AZ and I am loving it.
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Enjoy the rain while you can!
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Beautiful Bartholomew. Extremely romantic. βΊοΈ
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Thanks, Gypsie.
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Yes, this is relaxing and so needed after a long day and week! Thank you π πβΊοΈ
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Sorry you had a long week too. Hope your weekend gets better.
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Thank you, I did have a wonderful weekend, thank you!! ππ€
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And again, my response to one of your poems is – simply – Oh, my lord…….
Puts me in mind of a line from one of my favourite songs by Paulo Nutini – ahhhh – Paulo….sigh…..
“I turn to you and inhale you where you lay…”
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Nice line. I’ll have to check him out. Thanks!
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Hello again
I’d like to post this poem on my blog ..http://www.spanglefish.com/berniesblog/blog.asp
but it won’t let me include your rain picture – I have no idea why – the ways of t’Internet are ever a mystery to me.
Would that be ok with you – the poem, without the image?
Another line in Paulo’s song which makes me melt is …. ‘In love I was created and in love is how I hope I die.’
Oh yes!
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Of course, that’d be fine. I’m honored to be included on your blog.
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You’re on a roll. π
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Thanks! Seems like it’s either a drought or a flood.
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Ta-dah! Here you are…in good company…
http://www.spanglefish.com/berniesblog/blog.asp?msg=Entry%20Added
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Thanks for sharing my Fraiku!
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You’re very welcome! I believe in sharing.
Another line from Paulo that you might like…
“We are broken by others – but we mend ourselves.”
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There is longing and sadness in this.
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Thanks. Glad that came through.
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Beautiful linesπ
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Glad you like them. Thanks!
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My pleasure βΊ
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