Childhood Memories of an Afternoon Nap
Sneaking out the bedroom window
jumping off the porch roof
running to the park past
the fragrant rose bushes
Climbing the cherry tree
back to the turtle sandbox
with our crimson treats
Then to the big swings
where we pump our bare legs
pushing toes to the sky
three— two— one—
then free as a firefly
in the summer dusk floating
even as our stomach drops
This poem was composed with help from my friends at Charles House. We read summer-themed poetry today and then melded various childhood memories into the poem above.
Nice one, Bart. Can almost smell the roses and feel that jump.
Well done,
Mary
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Thanks, I think this one of the best we’ve written at Charles House.
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Sweet and nostalgic. Like popsicle s from the ice cream truck. 🍦
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That’s a great image that we should’ve included with the flavors and the music from the truck.
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Loved swinging barefoot on those old saddle back chain-link swings when I was young(er). I could feel that wonderfully horrible feeling of leaving my stomach at the upswing and then going back for more as I read your piece. Thank you for the nice remembrance Bartholomew! 😊
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You’re welcome. I was hoping to capture that visceral feeling.
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“even as our stomach drops”
That’s just it – on the back-swing – wheeeeeeee!
The Swing
How do you like to go up in a swing,
Up in the air so blue?
Oh, I do think it the pleasantest thing
Ever a child can do!
Up in the air and over the wall,
Till I can see so wide,
Rivers and trees and cattle and all
Over the countryside—
Till I look down on the garden green,
Down on the roof so brown—
Up in the air I go flying again,
Up in the air and down!
From A Child’s Garden of Verses by Robert Louis Stevenson
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We can’t beat Stevenson.
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Beautiful and joy filled memories.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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I remember hours and hours spent like that! Loved it, Bart!
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It’s funny how some memories are universal. Thanks, Susi!
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It’s true! :) You’re welcome, Bart!
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