(From Living Poetry’s Monday Poetry Prompt. Today’s was a Visual Prompt.)
Unable to Connect
I dropped my phone—
well— more like threw
it to the pavement—
by accident.
I can’t check email,
no more blinky text alerts,
it doesn’t chime or sing
when someone calls—
not that anyone called
besides scammers and salesmen.
I am untethered
from the 21st century,
floating away, high above the country,
finally seeing the big picture.
I quite like this one, it amplifies the modern isolation through technology.
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Thanks!
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Love the throw line.
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Thanks. I wasn’t sure if that would work.
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by accident… says a lot. Nicely done.
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Thanks.
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Saying much in the things you leave out, and a great last line, that’s a mark of a great Poem! This is a great poem indeed …
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Thank you very much!
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