Silence
The silence surprises me—
no more thumping from my chest—
no more swooshing through my ears—
the little gurgles of a living body
are now absent and missed.
The last light to enter these eyes
was from cold clinical fluorescents
as they sewed down my lids—
I felt the puncture of every needle,
including the embalmer’s.
Limbs useless, muscles atrophied,
a mind still spinning,
trapped inside a skull in pain,
feeling every itch of my skin—
nose filled with putrid rot.
The last sound was the dirt
hitting the top of the coffin.
Now— eternal silence
which I am unable to fill
with my screams.
Wow! Now that’s scary!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks. That’s what I was going for.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is brilliant! 🖤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow. I was expecting adjectives like “unsettling” or “disturbing” but I’ll take “brilliant” any day. Thanks!
LikeLike
Rightfully zo!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Fantastic! Very dark!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks! It seemed appropriate for the season.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very much so! 🕸
LikeLiked by 1 person
Pingback: SoSS #19- 2/11/2019 – Jupiter's Lair